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LSHamed Не на форуме
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Your lyrics and art
This is my first attempt to write some random lyrics: (wrote it in 1 hour)



"Pain at the river"



When all things comes together
When you're at the river
And the sky is crystal clear
And you want everything to disappear


From your mind..out of your mind
From your heart..out of your head



Make it vanish..make it stop "I said"
but my mind kept wondering what she said
Just enjoy the view..come out of the coma
but when I look at the rain, I keep remembering the pain
You can't hide your emotions at the river
Because what you feeling can fill up all rivers


My friend said: "Beat up your pain, come your shit together, you're still alive, don't be dead inside"
I said: "I feel like it's a dream, nothing is what it seem, I lost my hope, I just need to smoke"


Light up the fire..light up the seat
Light up the bone..to feel the heat


I left the view..I went to Zoo
I keep staring at a wall, Why? I don't have a clue
I tried to remember, oh the color is purple
I felt mad, I still fucking remember what we had!


God help me please, I got on my knees
Stop all my dreams, make me forget all my tears
Run through seas..Run from your fears
Run to madness, Run into my arms





Rate & have a nice day \m/
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01-28-2017, 06:53 AM
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#2
Your lyrics and art
Here you can share your lyrics or other art-projects that you create. It would be nice if you write some comments such as "what I was inspired of" or "how much had I drank"  [Изображение: blush.gif]
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Сегодня ты играешь треш, а завтра бабу свою съешь!
01-28-2017, 08:51 AM
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RE: Your lyrics and art
  The Form

   Father Kingu, 
   Change me.
   Grant me amorphis.

    I have no form.

    I had a shape.
    I thought it was mine,
    But it rotted
    The worms took it.

    Let me be a worm
    I want to eat myself!

    I bite myself.
    I chew myself.
    I swallow my self-knowledge
    I am the apple,
    And the worm.
    The Nothingness in the apple of Being.     

    All this fauns and weird companions
    Moonstruck witches and their demons
    Being nothing, make me anything.
    Ragged claws, six legs, pipestem eyes

     I will revive the old sacrament from the days of paganism
     That open the third eye and enter astral skies

     Self-eater,
     The blood of my words,
     Swallows itself, understanding that
     There was no apple
     No Eve
     And no Tree.

     There is only me!!


 Inspired by Therion, Aleister Crowley and H. P. Lovecraft - Feel free to use any way you may wish , no author rights nor none of that bullshit! \m/
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RE: Your lyrics and art
Check out the progressive metal artist from Croatia, inspired by the bands like Haken, Leprous, Dream Theater, Opeth, Ne Obliviscaris and many more.
Hope you'll enjoy, cheers!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fbkGrrfuk9I
10-06-2017, 03:59 PM
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RE: Your lyrics and art
(01-28-2017, 06:53 AM)LSHamed Писал(а): This is my first attempt to write some random lyrics: (wrote it in 1 hour)



"Pain at the river"



When all things comes together
When you're at the river
And the sky is crystal clear
And you want everything to disappear


From your mind..out of your mind
From your heart..out of your head



Make it vanish..make it stop "I said"
but my mind kept wondering what she said
Just enjoy the view..come out of the coma
but when I look at the rain, I keep remembering the pain
You can't hide your emotions at the river
Because what you feeling can fill up all rivers


My friend said: "Beat up your pain, come your shit together, you're still alive, don't be dead inside"
I said: "I feel like it's a dream, nothing is what it seem, I lost my hope, I just need to smoke"


Light up the fire..light up the seat
Light up the bone..to feel the heat


I left the view..I went to Zoo
I keep staring at a wall, Why? I don't have a clue
I tried to remember, oh the color is purple
I felt mad, I still fucking remember what we had!


God help me please, I got on my knees
Stop all my dreams, make me forget all my tears
Run through seas..Run from your fears
Run to madness, Run into my arms





Rate & have a nice day \m/

i like this a lot. 
at this part:
From your mind..out of your mind
From your heart..out of your head

i think you could say:
From your mind..out of your head
From your heart..out of your mouth
or something like that
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11-28-2017, 01:03 AM
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RE: Your lyrics and art
(11-28-2017, 01:03 AM)newmodelno15 Писал(а):
(01-28-2017, 06:53 AM)LSHamed Писал(а): This is my first attempt to write some random lyrics: (wrote it in 1 hour)



"Pain at the river"



When all things comes together
When you're at the river
And the sky is crystal clear
And you want everything to disappear


From your mind..out of your mind
From your heart..out of your head



Make it vanish..make it stop "I said"
but my mind kept wondering what she said
Just enjoy the view..come out of the coma
but when I look at the rain, I keep remembering the pain
You can't hide your emotions at the river
Because what you feeling can fill up all rivers


My friend said: "Beat up your pain, come your shit together, you're still alive, don't be dead inside"
I said: "I feel like it's a dream, nothing is what it seem, I lost my hope, I just need to smoke"


Light up the fire..light up the seat
Light up the bone..to feel the heat


I left the view..I went to Zoo
I keep staring at a wall, Why? I don't have a clue
I tried to remember, oh the color is purple
I felt mad, I still fucking remember what we had!


God help me please, I got on my knees
Stop all my dreams, make me forget all my tears
Run through seas..Run from your fears
Run to madness, Run into my arms





Rate & have a nice day \m/

i like this a lot. 
at this part:
From your mind..out of your mind
From your heart..out of your head

i think you could say:
From your mind..out of your head
From your heart..out of your mouth
or something like that

I'm glad that u liked it, and you're right I wasn't comfortable about that chorus, so, I changed it to:

From your mind..out of your head
From your heart..out of your think
02-23-2018, 07:36 PM
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RE: Your lyrics and art
Ahmm... Since I was never able to record my music and use my lyrics, I'm trying to focus on amateur photography and some random texts.
I would never call it poetry or something like this. That is too pretentious for me.

But you can see some clicks - and read if you speak portuguese.

https://r-you-there.tumblr.com/
04-26-2018, 08:17 AM
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